I fired 8 clients last quarter. Here is why.

Item: I fired 8 clients last quarter. Here is why.
Rating: 7.5
Author: Lytmus

A tight, credible hook with a real outcome number, undermined by a generic maxim and a CTA that asks for commitment before delivering any framework value.

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